Features of the University of Pennsylvania Essay Editing Intensive Program

Why choose this program?
- 17 years of successful admissions: Overwhelming success rate for Ivy League admissions including the University of Pennsylvania
- Crystallization of practical knowledge: All of Alpha's expertise from years of helping students gain admission to Penn, Harvard, Princeton, and other top universities!
- Remarkable track record: An intensive program filled with expertise and mindset developed from evaluating over 1,000 essays every year!

This program is ideal for:

• High school students aiming to attend the University of Pennsylvania
• Those who want to study in an educational environment that emphasizes the fusion of practical learning and liberal arts
• Students considering applications to Ivy League caliber universities

Why this program delivers results:

1. Practical training

   • Complete understanding of the University of Pennsylvania Admissions Office evaluation perspective
   • Guidance that captures the core of the "Why Penn" essay
   • Building compelling reasons that leverage Philadelphia's urban environment and campus attractions

2. Thorough individual feedback

   • Over 100 evaluation points
   • Specific improvement advice from former admissions officers
   • Evaluation system that measures understanding of interdisciplinary education and entrepreneurial spirit

3. Overwhelming instructional capability

   • Perfect preparation for Penn-specific prompts
   • Effective expression of the strengths of specialized schools like Wharton and the appeal of connected learning
   • Development of writing skills that express practical intellect and innovative spirit

Outstanding admission results

• University of Pennsylvania acceptance rate: More than 5 times the normal rate
• Ivy League acceptance rate: Over 75%
• Scholarship acquisition rate: Over 65% (when combining intensive training and Alpha classes)

Testimonials from program participants

> "For the first time, I clearly understood how to express my passion for Penn's interdisciplinary curriculum and practical learning. As a result, I received acceptance notifications not only from Penn but from multiple Ivy League schools."
> - 3rd-year student at a private high school in Tokyo

> "I was able to find a unique perspective on the Wharton School's practical business education and its fusion with liberal arts. With each round of editing, I became better at identifying my strengths, and ultimately submitted my essay with confidence."
> - International school graduate

Reasons to start now

1. Complete guidance system: Thorough preparation for Penn-specific prompts
2. Practical training: Editing based on actual evaluation criteria
3. Guaranteed results: Admission methods proven by 17 years of results

Why you should start immediately:

• University of Pennsylvania selection criteria become stricter every year
• Deep understanding of the fusion of practical study and liberal arts, and entrepreneurial spirit become increasingly important
• Early preparation is a decisive factor for acceptance

In conclusion

A complete systematization of admission expertise cultivated over 17 years.
Secure your opportunity to study at the University of Pennsylvania.
Let's start the intensive training now!

Advisor Profiles

TJ
At Sumitomo Corporation, oversaw budgets, settlements, and performance for 800+ global subsidiaries, plus investor relations. Youngest trainee picked for Sumitomo USA (NY), where he restructured the U.S. steel business and secured major financing for infrastructure in emerging markets and a leading Asian telecom giant. Earned an MBA from the University of Chicago Booth School of Business (Finance, Entrepreneurship, Organization Management). Founded the UChicago Japanese Association and kicked off the first "JAPAN TRIP" (now a celebrated annual event). At Goldman Sachs Investment Banking, spearheaded M&A, IPOs, and fundraising in media and consumer sectors, alongside private equity deals and restructurings. Handpicked as one of six from 200+ candidates for a prestigious Japanese entrepreneurship program, mentored by top Asia-Pacific business founders. Led UChicago Booth Alumni Association (2006-2010). Track record of landing students at elite schools like Harvard, Stanford, and top Asian universities, plus powerhouse firms like McKinsey, Goldman Sachs, Toyota, Google, and global banks. Known for rigorous TOEFL, GMAT, IELTS, and GRE prep, bold goal-setting, and stellar outcomes. Swamped with requests from students worldwide.

Emi Sakashita
Tokyo University grad (Pharma Sciences) who researched brain function, memory, and depression. Developed antidepressants at a top pharma firm, then mastered cognitive behavioral therapy and developmental psychology at Columbia University (Clinical Psychology). COO of Alpha Advisors and founder of "Mental Lab," an online platform blending brain science and psychology. A prodigy who aced 4th-grade math before elementary school via Kumon, she cracked Joshi Gakuin’s entrance exam with minimal prep—thanks to ultra-efficient study hacks. Tutored 30+ students into elite schools during college. Now, she crafts personalized, brain-science-backed programs to skyrocket your learning. Her AI isn’t just a tool—it’s your 24/7 Ivy League edge, optimizing memory and potential. Students rave: “Fastest path to top results.”

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